Exercises From Workbooks · Thoughts on thursday

Writing Exercise #1

This is taken from above posted book, now obviously I cannot post the chapter which goes along with the exercise nor am I going to print every exercise in the book am pretty sure the author would not be happy with that.   The idea here is every other week opposite my vlog post I shall look at an exercise in this or one of the other books I seem to be accumulating and give you my thoughts on how that particular book is helping me so for todays exercise I have chosen this one as with the new year approaching I quite like the idea of this…

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Now I confess I haven’t actually done this one but it ties in with a blog post a read recently over at One Handed Writers, they were discussing how they had a scent for each of their characters in their minds as they wrote about them and I think that is part of what I get from this idea.

To me this is not so much a five minute exercise as an on going project so what I intend to do is grab a nice new clean notebook and divide it up into the senses then actually make notes of various sensations.  I guess it will be a little like saying something tastes like chicken then trying to explain to someone who has never eaten it what chicken tastes like.  I think something I am guilty of at times is assuming that people share my experience of things a prime example is if I were to talk about the smell of a fire burning, my fires when I burn them tend to have a lot of rose wood in them where I have hacked back the wild rose that grows in my garden yet I know if I were burning pine boughs it would smell differently.  I can really see how this one will help me create more layers to my writing and especially my poetry and the idea of starting a sensory journal is quite exciting.  So what do you think is this something that could work for you?

The Muse · Thoughts on thursday

Hmmmm how to keep focus when my mind is wandering

Okay the first draft is almost done and now I have hit a snag.  I know I need to keep going and get it down then start the editing part.  The problem I am having is my mind keeps wandering into possiblities for new stories.  So I am asking you guys for advice!

How do you keep your fingers on track when your mind starts wandering?

Is this normal for the mind to be off in advance before a work is truly finished? (This is my first novel remember so right now I feel like there is something wrog with me that I can’t stay focused on it)

Any tips keeping the momentum going?

Maybe it is just one of those days and when I come back to it later after work my focus will be back I hope that is the case.  But I feel bad that now when I have an hour where I could be hard at work on the novel I just can not get anything done on it.  I typed a few hundred words decided they were crap and deleted them.  Should I leave the crap will it still be crap later…well actually I think no matter how long I left this mornings it would still have been crap but thats life I guess.

On a more positive note tomorrow will be my 100th post I suppose I should do something special but cant decide what so I am going to let you pick what you would like to see then I shall attempt to please you. So would you like…

The Muse · Thoughts on thursday

Banging My Head off the Wall

Woohoo I got my 100th followers thankyou so much to all of you who visit, like and comment.  I still have some blogs to revisit and some to explore more fully I will get there I promise.

 

Tonight the house has been turned upside down by the new arrival Patch and I do have lots of pics I shall post soon.  But for tonight it is the frustration of writing which is on my mind.  Am a few chapters away from the end of the first draft of the novel and have hit a little wall.  If I am honest it is the first one I have hit so I probably shouldn’t complain.  Don;t get me wrong its not as if I don;t know where the story is going or anything like that it is just a few paragraphs I just don’t seem to be able to get to sound how I want.  Three times I started wrote the first few paragraphs of the chapter in question then deleted them all. Then about a dozen times I wrote the first couple of lines and hit you guessed it the good old delete button.

 

I left it went off did other things went back to it repeated all the above steps.  Finally I bit the bullet and wrote without hitting delete am still not happy with it but have decided to leave it till the next draft to worry about it and move on.  I guess as i am new to the whole novel writing process I am asking for advice, is this normal? Will it all sort itself in the editing? What do you do when your muse has buggered off to the pub and left you home alone?