It is Tuesday so it should be Mysteries of Udolpho but I will be honest I have not read enough to write a post about, there are just so many more interesting books, maybe I will have to put away all the other books round the house until I get it finished so I don’t get distracted. So today I debated what to do and I thought I haven’t written a poem in a while and most of the ones I write are a little depressing so I have challenged myself to write a raunchier poem. I read a few blogs by people who write erotica some in verse form and while I have written rather kinky sex scenes in my novel I have never really tried writing sensual so here goes at least if it fails miserably we can all have a good laugh.
I close my eyes,
Feel your breath
Upon my cheek.
Its warmth
Sends a quiver
Through my body.
Slowly you peel
Back the sheet
Revealing me
Exposing me,
My vulnerability
To your touch
Hypnotised by the
Steady warmth
I wait anticipating
Loving for those
Practised moves
That play a concerto
With my senses
Building to the crescendo
Where I will thrash
In the waves
Of your music.
Eyes remain sealed
To open them
Would break the spell
And I would know
You are not here,
And all I have
Is the memory.
You did a really good job in my opinion.
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I am not sure about it I think I write graphic better than sensual though of course my graphic is quite violent as well because of the novels subject of medieval dark fantasy not sure if you will have seen this you will have to let me know what you think….https://paulaacton.com/2012/06/15/100th-post/
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I think they story would do well. I’d love to read more.
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There. You’ve got me all of a doo daa now. I’ve come over all unnecessary. It’ll take weeks to get my blood pressure down and I just know I’m going to be dreaming again. You have to be gentle and lead up to these things slowly……
xxx Massive Hugs xxx
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I need a cold shower now 😉
You’ve done a great job here, Paula 😀
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This is beautifully composed.
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